Wow!  This just gets better and better!!!!  Great plot, right-on characterizations, snapy dialog, and polished writing style.  You should be really proud of your story.

I look forward to reading those additional 30 chapters - very much enjoying this story - like how your started with AU human Buffy and then Buffy Slayer - nice difference.

good read, thank you. loved the a/n. very happy this is only a mid point.

Well done! :)

Ooo, Wesley's onto Buffy already. excellent.

Lovely and looking forward to the next 30 BTW.

Good bargain. Buffy may not realize how smart she has been until much later but this is the best insurance policy she could have purchased.

Kathleen

And looking forward to them all. :)

keep er coming

Just ran across your story and read straight through. Very intriguing story and I love how you've brought us this far. Looking forward to your updates. Indeed she's made a deal with the Devil, course he's her devil, she just doesn't want to admit it.

I have enjoyed the Wes, Fred, and Cordelia scenes. You did a great job of capturing their personalities (characterization) while still make the adjustments to their backgrounds that you needed for your story. I liked Wes’s final gift to Buffy and that he was her first watcher, albeit an unofficial one.