02/26/2008 12:52 am
that was suppose to be' way.' also i should remember to sign in to leave a comment.
02/23/2008 01:32 am
now that is the was to start a tale. very good read, thank you.
02/22/2008 07:19 pm
An interesting idea for a story. Look forward to seeing where you take this.
sara
02/22/2008 07:50 am
really interesting start, can't wait to see what happens next!
Amy. B
02/21/2008 09:46 pm
Good 1st chapter update soon
02/21/2008 08:54 pm
Wow ! So intriguing ! I hope to read more soon... it looks pretty interesting !!! Nymphea.
Cas
02/21/2008 08:31 pm
Interesting premise - wondering where it can go from here.