Business as usual by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 15 Dust to Dust

04/30/2008 07:08 pm
Oh I did know know I was this far behind, loved it.
 Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.

sirc
04/29/2008 07:25 pm
Great chapter!

03/24/2008 07:50 pm
love the chapter ending. very good read, thank you.
 glad you liked it.  Just posted another chpt!

Cas
03/22/2008 01:43 am
Sweet but sad, kind of like Agnes.  I wonder if maybe Agnes will find a way to go to the funeral - it wouldn't be so odd for an old lady to be out in the sun under an umbrella.  She could say she'd met Joyce in hospital, which would be absolute truth.
 I know you won't believe me, but I'm writing the funeral episode right now!  But no umbrella!

03/19/2008 10:44 pm
I do so love Agnes!
Are you trying so show us how much vampires don't need a soul to feel? 
I liked the "rock cakes" bit.  funny!  (and is a rock cake a real thing, not just a name for an unfortunate baking accident?)
 Glad you like my Agnes.  And yes, rock cakes are real!  Very easy to make - they are the cakes most children make first when they learn to cook over here.  Called rock cakes because you just drop the mixture on the baking tray in dollops and don't smooth it out. Then add crunchy brown sugar to the top so they look like little shiny rocks when baked.

03/19/2008 01:23 am
Agnes is not a murderer from what you have written.  The thing that would "damn" a vampire is what they DO not what they are I would think so the religious behavior of Agnes is totally proper.  Then again if you use the Christian model...ALL are sinners bound for hell save for God's grace so why shouldn't a "demon", a monster, a vampire not have the same recourse, especially one either seeking redemption  (as Spike will be in time) or not having gone to the depts of demonic behavior after being turned like Agnes?

Anyone who complains on that issue is muddled IMHO.

EXCELLENT characterization in all events.

KAthleen
 thanks for your interesting comments.  It is a subject that has led to much discussion which is always a good thing!   

03/18/2008 09:57 pm
Yes Agnes, God surely includes you (and Spike for that matter)!  It's only His warriors that can't see differences.

I suspected she'd be surprised that her Joyce was the Slayers mom.  Really hope that when she DOES meet Buffy it's a fine a meeting as it had been with Joyce. 

Agnes can console Spike a bit, I hope.  I hated how he was treated by them all when Joyce died...he cared about her too and was denied the right to grieve. 

Loving this story as always.  You do a perfect joy of telling the episode canon from her standpoint here.  Lovely.

Kathleen
 My thanks, as always, for reviewing. Glad you liked Agnes and Spike in this chp.  I received a couple of rather barbed e mails about vampires not being able to sing hymns or have faith and it started an interesting discussion on my LJ which threw up some very good points.

Overall the main reaction seems to be do what I like and to hell with what anyone else thinks vampires can and cannot do!

Carol
03/17/2008 02:48 am
I don't review enough but this story is really good.  I love Agnes and she's bringing up some interesting questions.  This is a great retelling of Season 5 from another's point of view.
 Thank you for reviewing. I love hearing from readers and am so pleased you are enjoying Agnes' story.  Yes, she has some very different ideas from the usual vampire lore although some people aren't happy with a vampire who still retains their faith!

03/17/2008 02:47 am

03/17/2008 12:14 am
Very sweet memento to Joyce - each character resolving their feelings in their own way.  Loved it.
 Thank you very much for reading.

03/16/2008 09:12 pm
Great Spike/Agnes conversation, you really made me feel both Spike and Agnes' pain. :(  Aggie's thoughts on life as vampire was also interesting, the bit about being too embarrassed to look up vampires on the internet is just so Aggie... maybe another trip to the Magic Box is in the cards for her. ;) Loved the closing scene, I found it very touching. Fantastic chapter!
 Much appreciate your remarks.  Agnes and her faith are obviously causing some readers problems but glad you weren't offended by it.

anon462
03/16/2008 06:35 pm
So good, and yes, so very sad. (I always hated Xander for the way he treated Spike that night, he had no right to say what he did.) I hope that Agnes is right, for herself at least, that even for vampires there is a salvation in the end. :(

(Really love this story, can't wait to read each and every new chapter when you post it.)  :)
 Yes, I hated Xander for his behaviour, even allowing that he was in shock, too, at the time.   So pleased you are still enjoying the story.  Agnes' faith is obviously a difficult problem for some readers to accept.

03/16/2008 06:03 pm

Nicely done.  I love seeing the characters we know so well through Agnes' eyes.

 Thank you so much. Glad you are still enjoying Agnes.

Bynee
03/16/2008 04:29 pm
Vampire singing hymns.......hmmmm
 Agnes was and is a member of the Church of England - also belongs to the Women's Institute.  Being a vampire has never changed her faith and whatever demon took over her isn't strong enough to stop her.  She does have difficulty with crosses, though!