04/13/2008 02:25 pm
Nice little drabble. Really captured Spike's messed up thoughts and how he just wanted to love her.
04/13/2008 02:13 pm
God, poor Spike! You really capture the desperation and devastation he's going through; which is exactly what caused the entire scene in the bathroom. Bravo!!
04/13/2008 10:24 am
A true reflection of Spike's desperation - sadly the booze hasn't helped his clarity of thought.
04/13/2008 12:29 am
Beautiful work! So heart-breaking, especially that last line.