Natalie is great.  Love the way she got Spike in trouble and she hasn't even been born yet.

natalia does sound as one would imagine buffy  sounding at five. fun read, thank you.

Very cute - and time for some Angel whupping.

This story is so fun. I liked this chapter a lot, especially the funny future family dynamic.

Here's my additional nit:
"the light breeze that past through the desert" should be passed.

Please keep this one coming!

I like your fic! really like the way the story is going! I hope u update soon!

and Natlia seems to be the cutest kid!

Cute kid!  Spirits bickering was funny.
One tiny nit, though...
"submit to the slumber which had alluded her for quite a while. "
I think you mean eluded - as in escaping.  Sorry to be a pain...

*melts at the cuteness that is Natalia*  That was an adorable chapter.   I can't wait to read more.
Jace