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Aloha my love by Isabel Anon 05/29/2017 11:36 pm Epilogue Thanks for a great story! You did a great job with the characters, and the writing was really good! Brit Girl 10/13/2012 02:11 am Epilogue That is probably some of the best dialogue I have read in stories on here so far. I could actually imagine it being scripted and the actors faces and voices saying them in parts! I hope that's not too weird but a credit to how accurate you got them. Love how Spike wasn't a push over either. Well done and thank you very much. Brit Girl bezziemate@gmail.com (If you still have an account on here and get to read this and want to let me know you read this) :-) Ania 07/08/2010 05:54 pm Epilogue awww... the story really get me.. love it hun.. thanx for the great one.. i love happy ending.. Hexe 10/16/2009 10:38 pm Epilogue I liked it. Very nice story. Ben is great. :) Natalie 10/23/2008 11:58 pm Epilogue Great story =] kw 06/18/2008 03:54 am Epilogue cute story Thanks! youbegoodbaby 05/08/2008 09:16 pm Epilogue loved it! Thanks! 04/26/2008 06:55 pm Epilogue man oh man if this wasnt the most perfect spuffy story someone shoot me it was totally in cannon really believable no potentials dawn not being annoying for once no peaches to spoil things great action great comedy xander at least trying to be nice buffy and spike starting out as friends helps a lot to im so tired of stories where the first 8 chapters are all about buffy denying what she feels or saying oh spike lacks a soul so he cant love it was so fun i hated to see it end and even better perk no one dies it took me 5 hours to read boy am i glad i did man that was good keep up the good work.!!!!!! Thank you so much! It made me so sad to end this story, but it's all worth it when I get reviews like that. Bynee 04/21/2008 01:49 pm Epilogue Wow, here we are...I had followed this story like what 4 years? on at least 4 different websites.. Congratulations for completing this.. I enjoyed the ride.. I know! lol It's been a long ride. But it was fun and I'm gonna miss it. I might write a sequel eventually, but not right now. I want to finish Decoy first. Thank you. it is always sad to come the final chapter of a fine tale. thanks for the read. And thank you for your support. Every time I post a chapter, I look forward to your review. Knowing I have faithful readers who enjoy my stories motivates me to write. So thank you. I'm sad to see this story end, but I enjoyed each and every part of it! It was a great ride indeed! xxx Thanks! Nothing more rewarding for a writer than reading about how much people enjoyed your work. It makes me feel like I didn't write all this for nothing. {hug} Noooooooo, I don't want it to end *pouts* If I ask very prettyprettypleasewithchocolateandSpikeontop for a sequel? Visiting all those places? Maybe? Loved this!!! lol I know! I didn't want it to end either, but it had to eventually. I might write a sequel eventually--just because you asked so nicely and added a Spike on top lol--but I'll have to have a really good idea for it. It's just like the movies, you know? You watch an amazing movie, then they decide to make a sequel, it sucks balls, and it ruins it for you. I don't want that to happen. So we'll see. If I'm inspired, I will. But I'm not making any promisses and I do need to work on other stories first. Thank you for your support and your reviews. It means a lot to me. Thank you for this story, I have enjoyed every chapter! Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it. I hope you'll enjoy my next stories just as much. jane 04/17/2008 10:56 am Epilogue I've really enjoyed this story, been a riot from start to finish. Excellently done. Glad it made you laugh. I had a hell of a good time writing it too. That's why it was so hard to put the finishing touch to it. Ending a story is always a bitter sweet thing to me. I'm glad it's completed, but I'm gonna miss it. Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. How to make longhaul flights enjoyable! I've really enjoyed this tale - thanks for writing! Thanks, Lou. darknightofthesoul 04/17/2008 05:22 am Epilogue Hot, funny and adorable. When do you start your next one? I took a break from my other story, Decoy, to finish Aloha, so now I'm gonna be working full time on Decoy and maybe part time on a new one, but I'm not sure what yet. Then, maybe I'll consider a sequel for Aloha. But again... not sure. We'll see. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for your review. kim 04/17/2008 03:03 am Epilogue Hee hee, aw, good ending. Thanks! Lovely chapter - Buffy facing down Travers was a real treat. jane 12/02/2007 12:25 pm Independence day, Buffy Summers style Yay that was great, really really enjoyed it. Read through chapter 27 all at once after your last update. Love how original this fic is and happy to see such a strong Buffy. The showdown finally occurred and it didn't disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter!! kim 12/02/2007 03:43 am Independence day, Buffy Summers style Well, they've certainly come a long way, haven't they! YAY for a slick tie up of Quentin Travers. LOVE the memory wipe planned.....HE deserves it and it is the only safe thing to do. Glad Bernard didn't kill his Slayer and happy a man like him is in charge. He knows the mission and its importance but isn't stuck in retoric. Nice confrontation....great story. I've loved reading it from the start! Kathleen It's 02:25 am here, and I'm ecstatic I didn't go to bed sooner and got to read this chapter*grins* Still loving this story, wish Joss would have chosen something along these lines to develop Spuffy:( Well, a girl can't have everything, but there are stories that make it all better *winks* Thank you! XXX very good read, thank you. enjoyed using magic to wipe travers memory, but my sadistic side would have loved him to remember everything and be powerless to do anything about it. I started reading this two days ago and I have to say i relly enjoy it. Looking foward for the next chapter. Hey, I'm so glad you gave my story a chance and ended up liking it! It's almost over. Two or three chapters left, and I finished one last night. So it should get updated in a couple of days. darknightofthesoul 11/20/2007 06:11 am The US invasion More soon please!!! The next chapter should be up in a couple of day, promise. Now that's a really ebol cliffhanger :P Can't wait to see more!!!!! Oh, Quentin Travers won't like what's coming, that I can promise you lol Thanks for your review. Nikkole 11/18/2007 02:14 am The US invasion Nice!! Thanks, Nikkole! Great chapter, I'm all ' want more, now'. And you'll get more soon lol I'm sending the next chapter to my beta tonight. no need to beg. the quality of the update merits good comments. fine read, thank you. Glad you're still enjoying the story, vladt. Thanks for all your reviews. I appreciate them. jane 11/16/2007 09:53 pm The US invasion Pleased to see your still updating this fic. Loved the big entrance, can't wait to read more. I thought it was the kind of big entrance Buffy Summers would love lol. Glad you liked it. I'll update soon. Sotia M. 11/16/2007 05:26 pm The US invasion I love this story, hope you update soon!!! I will, promise. I'm really happy you like the story. Truly enjoy this story and so glad for an update. I understand RL and muse issues though. It was worth waiting for BTW. Still loving Ben and Spike being accepted is always a treat. Looking forward to more. Kathleen Thanks, Kathleen. My problem also have to do with discipline I'm afraid. If I force myself to sit down and write whatever comes to my mind, my muse eventually wakes up and get to work. But it's hard to do that sometimes. Glad you're still reading and enjoying. I can't believe this story is almost over :( Cat 11/15/2007 01:42 pm The US invasion OH HELL YEAH! The US Invasion. Can't wait to see how this ends! You'll find out soon. I'm planning on updating before the end of the week. Thanks for your review! I love this story, so pleased to see it updated. Now for the Travers face-off! He deserves shameful retribution. Face-off coming up! lol And let's just say... it doesn't look good for Travers ;) kim 11/15/2007 06:28 am The US invasion Still here! Ooo, showdown! Xander and Spike playing video games...perfect. Anya complaining about space, Giles stuck on the couch, Buffy's typical nervous energy... Benji better not lose his nerve...he hasn't stuttered, yet, so I think he's doing pretty well! If Quentin doesn't kill him... ;) lol glad you liked it. I cracked myself up when I made Buffy call Benjamin "Benji". It made him sound like a cute little puppy for some reason :D jane 09/13/2007 08:59 am That surprising vampire of mine Great update, loved it Thank you, Jane. Glad you liked it. delightful read, thank you. loved xander getting it from both red and buffy. maybe, maybe it will sink in. Girls... Unite! lol Yeah, maybe he'll get it. I can see him on his death bed at 87 thinking "Oh! THAT's what she meant!" lol Alleluia! Xander heard a few home truths that were long overduw. Buffy has never been more eloquent, and the testimonial from Richard didn't hurt. Lovely chapter. Thank you, Lou. I'm glad you enjoyed Buffy's little speech. I hope it helped Xander see just how crappy his attitude is. No beating up of Xander? Maaaan, I've been gipped! lol Sorry lol But she did get him pretty bad with words, didn't she? kim 09/11/2007 11:32 pm That surprising vampire of mine Ah, a good turn. And a neat parallel to the rich nerd that helped the Angel gang in LA. Everybody should have an eccentric rich friend. :D Yep. Two type of friends that are good to have: the cool gay friend who knows his way around a Prada store, and the eccentric rich friend who can let you use his private plane ;) And about that rich nerd friend of Angel... I wasn't a big fan of AtS, only watched it once in a while. Now, I'll have to rewatch the show to see who you're talking about. You got me curious. 09/11/2007 09:26 pm That surprising vampire of mine Great chapter. Thank you. Glad you liked it. good read, thank you. could they take xander with and just toss him out over the atlantic? It's an idea I could consider ;) kim 09/07/2007 06:32 pm Going to war Hmmmm....Spike has a rich aquaintance? Close to SD? How'd that happen - and wow, a Spike that doesn't want to collect on a debt - he really is changing. Anya should really dump Xander. Yes, Spike is a big softy. Not that he would ever admit it lol And you're right, Anya could do so much better. Not that Xander doesn't have qualities... It's just that he's good at hiding them sometimes. jane 09/07/2007 02:08 pm Going to war Yay so the gangs all back together. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation with Travers. Maybe Spike can show them a bit of Londons night life. Looking forward to more. Soon, very soon. I promise :) Xander seems to be regressing to a spiteful 12-year-old. I'm not sure I'd be trusting him. Hey, maybe he'll get to the 13 year-old phase soon. You never know lol Inzey 09/07/2007 10:49 am Going to war Great chapter. Thanks, Inzey. I vote for Spike eating Travers *raises hand* Yeah, me too. But killing a human won't win him any votes with the Scoobies. So let's try Buffy's plan first ;) More plans!! I'm glad Xander stopped being a jerk for about five minutes :) Yep, five minutes. That's all he can manage for now. But maybe he'll see the light in the near future. well giles appears to be in her camp. good read, thank you. Yes, it's a good thing because they really needed some support. Poor Spike and Buffy. Can't they just be happy without everything getting in the way? Guess not lol Wow! I just picked up your story for the first time. Kept thinking I would read a little more then go to bed, but what can I say I had to read as far as I could. I love it. Can't wait for then next chapter. The best compliment a writer can get is that her fic kept someone awake late into the night ;) Glad you decided to give my story a chance and liked it. Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. Quentin's gonna get his ass kicked... which is always of the good! :) I hope this fic goes on for a loooong time. I'm gonna be so sad when it ends :P Aww {{hug}} Couple more chapters to go. At least five or six. But don't be too sad, I have a lot of ideas for other fics, and hopefully, you'll love them just as much. beanie 08/24/2007 04:27 am Will you kill me? I love this story so much. Great update! Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my story. kim 08/23/2007 11:15 pm Will you kill me? Oh, like Spike doesn't like to read.....but the Big Bad has to protect his image...LOL. Giles is lucky she wasn't really aiming to hurt him. I think he'd rather read poetry. Not that he would ever admit it. Like you said... reputation lol. Yeah, she could have given him a concusion with that book if she really wanted to. Giles IS lucky ;) I am so happy that this chapter was available. And what a way for Giles to find out about Buffy and Spike. Goo team for the united front that they are going to show towards Quentin. Thanks, Letitia. Glad you liked it. jane 08/23/2007 10:04 pm Will you kill me? So, Buffy's gonna take on the Council. 'Bout time somebody did. Ca't wait to read more. Loved it. Thanks, jane. You're right, it's about time someone put those stuffy British men back in their place. Go, Buffy! She really is on the brainy bandwagon now! Great chapter. lol yeah, she's trying. And she might be on to something. You'll see. Thanks for your review. Poor Spike, death by research! Yep, the worse death possible lol Great chapter. I love it when you update. Aw, thanks! I hope you'll like the new update. Jane 08/12/2007 04:03 pm History lesson wow so Buffy and Spike aren't unique. I wonder if Giles knew anything about the other Slayers? If so you'd think he'd realise they were meant to be.Can't wait for more Is he clueless about this, is he not? That's the big question. You'll see soon. I won't leave you waiting for too long. beanie 08/12/2007 02:55 am History lesson Wow, the plot thickens. I loved all the Slayer stories and I can't wait to see what Giles will do. Thanks, beanie ~ 08/10/2007 08:14 pm History lesson Ooooh lol hey! i love this story! can't wait to see what giles will say. why nobody ever came up with a portuguese slayer? :s Aw, I'm sure there was a Portuguese Slayer. She just didn't date a vampire ;) Glad you love the story. Lafond seems like someone buffy could trust. but is giles? will she? very good read, thank you. I think it all depends on Buffy when it comes to Lafond and trust. After reading the journals, not sure how she'll react. She has a hard time letting people explain themselves sometimes. And Giles..? You'll find out soon enough ;) I'm writing the chapter as we speak. Very interesting turn of events -- I love it. Thank you. I love that you love it ;) Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Buffy will say to Giles. lol Yes, should be interesting to say the least. I'll update soon. 08/09/2007 03:20 pm History lesson please keep writing. I was frantic for a second there when it stopped abruptly, but then i saw it was updated yesterday. I can't quite explain my relief. Nothing to worry about. I have never abandonned a story before and I'm not about to start. Which is kinda weird coming from someone who never finishes anything. But not my stories. So yes, it will be updated. Soon hopefully :) Thank you for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And now for the big question--is Giles Buffy's or the Council's Watcher? Excellent question. One that will be answered shortly ;) Just keep in mind that despite his attitude in season 7, I actually do like Giles. Now would I trust him with Spike's life? Definitely not. But I like anyway. The thing is... you can't trust me ;) I have in the past turned characters I like into bad guys. I'm messing with your head, can you tell? If I give you the answer, I'll spoil you. All I can say is, it's going to be good. I hope. kim 08/09/2007 10:48 am History lesson And?! Well....comes as no surprise. Bernard sounds like an interesting fellow. At least someone at the Council has a heart. Sometimes I think that when I write, I'm possessed. I'm just the fingers typing the story lol. This guy appeared out of nowhere. No, seriously, I thought they needed more than just Ben on their side at the Council. Whether Buffy will give him a chance or not after reading about him and his Slayer, now that's another story. Tamara 08/09/2007 05:30 am History lesson That's a very scary trend. Yes it is. But Ben did a good thing. Now that she knows, Buffy can do something about this. mandytheformermusician 08/09/2007 05:07 am History lesson More, quickly, please?! I'll do my best. I'll probably start working on it Saturday or Sunday morning. Uh oh! Run! Nah. Buffy can take Giles... if she has to. Although, remembering the season finale of S6, maybe I'm not so sure. He was cool lol. Let's just hope she doesn't decide to kick his ass first, ask questions later. Great chapter. Thank you, Inzey. Next chapter should be posted soon. Phew - nice reunion. Looks like troubles ahead though. Some friends, huh? As long as they have each other, right? With friends like these, who needs enemies lol. But maybe they'll come around. At least some of them. We'll see. Jane 08/01/2007 08:45 am You and me against the world Two quick updates, love it I was afraid people would lose interest in the story because it took me so damn long between updates, so I put my other story on hold to work on this one. That explains the quick updates. I'm going to try to have another chapter ready next week. Pfft. Don't wait... just go jump on that plane now. Go! Yeah, it's tempting, isn't it? lol beanie 08/01/2007 05:03 am You and me against the world I was so glad to see this update. I really love this story and I'm curious to see what the Scoobies will do about Buffy and Spike. I'm working on the next chapter so it shouldn't be too long before you find out. very good chapter, thank you. :) You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it. ElyseNotElsie 07/27/2007 04:24 am Olive branch You updated at long last, and it's a wonderful new chapter! I'm so excited! Thank you :-) Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'll update again in a couple of days. what a wonderful group of "friends." very good chapter, thank you. Aren't they great? Every time one of my friend is being supportive, I think to myself "Darn, I wish she was more like the Scoobies" lol Thanks for the reviews jessiesaly 07/26/2007 09:52 am Olive branch I just love your story. Keep on writing. I can't wait until they make up! Great job. Thank you! You won't have to wait too long. I sent the chapter to my beta already and she said she'll send it back Tuesday night. Dump them, you don't need them, Buffy! *nods* Yeah, when you have friends like that, you don't need enemy. Well, the whole gang appears to be in character. Judgemental jerks, with the possible exception of Tara and Anya. I know. The judgemental streak is the on flaw of the scoobies I couldn't deal with. That and the fact they think Buffy belongs to them and they can control her life. Annoying. We'll see if I try to redeem them or not. I haven't decided yet ;) beanie 07/26/2007 05:54 am Olive branch I hate the Scoobies. Such hypocritical jerks. Glad Buffy told them though, now it's time for some Spuffy make-up lovin'. Absolutely! Nothing like make-up lovin' lol It's too bad about the Scoobies: they were so nice and sweet in the earlier seasons. People change. But maybe it's not too late for them yet. We'll see. Enjoyed catching up. I’ve always liked this story so much. Good chapter. Dying to know what happens next. I'll do my best to update faster this time. I hate when it takes me so long to update because it makes me feel guilty. I already know what I want to do with the next chapter, so it should be easy to write. I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying it. Thanks. the reaction of the gang was in character. Wondering what Xander is up to... Nicely done. Can't wait for more! Yeah, they need an attitude adjustment bad. They'll get it. All in good time. Thanks for the review. kim 07/25/2007 12:47 pm Olive branch See, Buff....are these really the people you want around you? LOVED Dawn's work here....I hope Buffy goes to Spike. He won't be able to resist her tears, and then she can get her foot in the door to apologize. I don't know about her, but the Scoobies from season six and seven are NOT people I would hang out with. Nostalgia probably makes her be nice to them. Crazy girl. So glad you like Dawn lol. I love writing her, she cracks me up. How can Buffy put the Scoobie`s happiness before hers and Spike`s? She is crackers! lol yes she is. But believe me, someone will make her forget all about the Scoobies pouting pretty soon ;) Excellent chapter and well worth the wait. Yes, Dawn was right...a grand gesture is just the ticket....but just where is Xander headed? I have a feeling Buffy needs to get to Spike's crypt muy pronto! So glad this one is being updated again. Kathleen Thank you, Kathleen. I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter so it shouldn't be too long. Ah - stupid Scoobies! Poor Spike. Yep, the Scoobies never disappoint. Always judgemental lol. Things will get better... eventually... I think. lol TwilightChild 07/25/2007 03:00 am Olive branch Poor Buffy. She finally confessed everything, only to get her heart broken. I'm very excited to see another chapter of this story. I adore it. Its very sweet. Well, you see, I wasn't sure about that. I thought about making the gang give her a standing ovation after she'd deliver the good news of her romance with Spike, but then I thought... Not even in Bizzaroworld lol. You're right, poor Buffy. Maybe she should have stuck with Cordelia at the beginning of S1. At least Cordy didn't give a shit about anything if it didn't concern her. Thanks for the review Poor Buffy!! Why is it that it's always her love life on the front page for everyone to discuss. She'd better get to Spike quick, I have half an idea of where Xander has gone... Easy answer: poor choice of friends lol. Don't worry... Spike is her next stop ;) Thanks for the review I certainly hope Dawn only uses her powers for the forces of good. Or possibly to annoy the forces of evil into self-immolation. Wow, I actually like the bratty kid sister in your story. beanie 04/13/2007 07:14 pm Dawn, master of puppets Uh oh. I'm glad Dawn is willing to play matchmaker. Loving the story. lol I knew those pictures would come back to haunt them! :) I would've thought with Dawn and her crush on Spike she would've been more interested to see them.... lol!! hehe. yay! I was so excited when I saw a new chapter for this story! I love it btw! looking forward to the next update :D “That just won’t do.†go dawn. fun read, thank you. Okay, you're not sposed to almost make me like Dawn... kim 04/12/2007 09:33 pm Dawn, master of puppets Hee hee heee.....Go, Dawn!!!!! Someone has to get around their stupidity. Lou 04/12/2007 07:41 pm Dawn, master of puppets And I athought Dawn was the immature one!! Great chapter! jane 04/12/2007 06:50 pm Dawn, master of puppets Yay The Dawnster to the rescue. I hope she's gonna knock some sense into them both. Lou 04/12/2007 07:34 pm Leaving on a jet plane Chill, Spike, snd give the girl a chance! you definitely have buffy down pat. it is really hard for her to understand how much spike loves and how easily he is hurt. very good read, thank you. I see Idiot Buffy is on the loose again. Mali 04/05/2007 07:48 pm Leaving on a jet plane NO! YEEEESSS! lol Of course Buffy had to screw up. She acts first, thinks later. That's how our girl works. Maybe she'll learn this time. Who am I kidding! jane 04/05/2007 08:03 am Leaving on a jet plane Great update missed this fic. On the edge of my seat waiting for more. I won't leave you on the edge of your seat for too long, promise No, Spike, NOOOOOO I know. Poor Spikey! I'm evil. I have no control over what my characters do, sorry. lol. Thanks for the review. kim 04/05/2007 06:52 am Leaving on a jet plane Stupid Buffy.....if you don't want to tell them at the airport, then talk to Spike! He'd be understanding that you just want to do it in private and at an appropriate time. But now she's hurt his feelings.... Cool...Watcher's Journals... I don't want to spoil the fun for the readers who didn't get what Buffy was thinking but I'll say this: You're a wise woman lol. *head desk* Soooo typical Buffy *bangs head on desk* I hope there'll be a lot of groveling in the next chapter. Great work. :D Typical indeed. Thanks. Glad you enjoy the story. seductive danger 04/03/2007 07:37 am A lesson in Italian your story is excellent! you need to update soon so i know what happens when the blonde duo get back to sunnyhell, please The next chapter is almost ready. I'll try to put the finishing touch to it and post it as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing. excellent chapter, thank you. very glad your back. Thanks, vladt. I'll try my best to finish the next chapter as soon as possible. Avalon 02/26/2007 09:51 pm A lesson in Italian Enjoyed the chapter. Moremoremore XD More soon, promise! just giddy when I saw the chapter and I finally got a chance to read. Loved it. Ben was too funny turning on this uncle and Carlita. And now they have to find the woman. Awesome story and I was so happy to see it continue. Wasn't he funny? He even made me laugh lol. Glad you still like it. I'll do my best to keep writing. Damn, she got away. Couldn't Buffy slap around Ben to work out her frustrations? Aww, poor Ben. He's trying to redeem himself here, give the guy a chance lol. But you're right, that would have helped. Thanks for the review. Lea 02/24/2007 05:45 pm A lesson in Italian Hi! Loving your story! Please update soon! Glad too see your writer's block is over. Glad it's over too. It sucked. I went to a coffee shop with my computer a while back, and all I managed to write was "All work and no play makes Isabel a dull girl" over and over again like psycho Jack Nicholson in The Shining. Scary lol. But it's all good. Maybe I just needed the break. I'll start working on the next chapter right away. I alway enjoy your writing and it's good to have you back. So who said: "Son of a bitch!†? It was dirty mouth Buffy. Gonna have to wash that mouth with soap lol. Glad you're still reading. DAMMIT! STUPID DEGO BITCH! Exactly. You take the words right out of my mouth lol kim 02/24/2007 01:15 am A lesson in Italian Yay! They found them...then let her go. Well, at least the cards are out in the open. Buffy should learn not to get too cocky. Never turn your back on someone who just tried to kill you. Duh. lol And like you said, at least now they know what they're dealing with... And that they can kill her. Yay. Thanks for your review. Very funny - Spike pouting because he didn't get to fight - getting lost - arguing about nothing. Total Spuffy. Robyn 08/12/2006 09:40 pm Rescue me I loved Buffy teasing Spike about not being able to find his way out of the jungle and his embarrassment at being rescued. Thanks for the updates, I really enjoyed them. Lou 08/01/2006 09:56 pm Rescue me Cards on the table and we're all happy. Lovely!! Thanks, Lou. I am just so happy to see this story continue. I did miss it. Love how they were found. And it is too funny that normal ppl had to come and find the "chosen" one along with her vampire companion.. can't wait until she gets back to the resort. lol Yeah, that's what I was going for. I thought it would be hilarious if normal people would find them. Thanks, letitia, and I'll try updating more often. Shanna 07/31/2006 11:40 pm Rescue me So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG** Shanna 07/31/2006 11:37 pm Rescue me So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG** I'll try to update more frequently from now on. Thanks for your review. fallen_angel 07/31/2006 08:43 pm Rescue me ROFLMAO! Well, I wanted to make you guys laugh. I guess I succeeded lol Nikkole 07/31/2006 07:39 pm Rescue me That was TOO funny! Great chapter. I loved Spike being all moody when she gets back to him. I am also very happy that he finally asked her what they were. Glad I made you laugh. That was the point :D And yes, it was about time they had that little talk. Now, let's just hope Buffy isn't being overly optimistic about their future in Sunnydale. Wouldn't it be great if she finally found the courage to tell him she loves him too? I'll update soon. kim 07/31/2006 06:15 pm Rescue me Ha ha ha! I'd expect better from Spike...navigate by the stars, or something. Thank goodness for park rangers. Poor Spike and Buffy. All the sex they had in the last couple of days affected their brains :D great update!! :heartfic: I totally love the new chappie, just the right amount of fun, seriousness and smut. Buffy and Spike are too cute, totally lost!! :) Can't wait for more!! :soon: Thank you, deedo. Glad you enjoyed it. lol that was funnny.. i cant wait until they get back to the hotel ;) lol Thank you. That was wonderfully gross. Still, I think you missed out not having her toss the demon in the volcano. Robyn 08/12/2006 09:14 pm How to kill a demon in three easy steps A big ouch on the part of Buffy getting bit but it might just turn out fortunate that Carlita thinks that she and Spike are dead. tsk tsk spike just cause you cant go out and play doesnt mean you get to be all huffy.. lol great update!! LOL Thanks. Now to murder the dego bitch Yeah. Wouldn't it be great if there was a way around the 'no killing humans' rule? We'll see. golddrake 07/30/2006 03:43 am How to kill a demon in three easy steps great chapter Thank you! kim 07/30/2006 03:28 am How to kill a demon in three easy steps Huh...what's up with Spike? You'll find out in the next chapter ;) Poor Spike doesn't like being left out when there's an oportunity for violence lol. Lou 07/30/2006 12:38 am How to kill a demon in three easy steps Aaah -- Spike missed the action. Nice and yucky. Yeah, poor Spikey. Stupid sun always ruins his fun. vladt 07/29/2006 11:20 pm How to kill a demon in three easy steps good read, thank you. looking forward to carlita getting hers and "Hot scented oil, candles ... could be fun." I think they'll enjoy both activities very much indeed. I'll try updating soon. Thanks for your review. Yucky demon killing. The Italian b____ is going to be surprised when Buffy shows up on her doorstep to kick her butt. More story please. Yeah, that's one surprise I don't think she'll enjoy lol fallen_angel 07/29/2006 07:03 pm How to kill a demon in three easy steps there's an Indian proverb which translates to "The fruit of patience is sweet" and boy this chapter was sweet! Demon deadage and promise of upcomming smut, you rock! Glad it was worth the wait ;)Thanks for the review Reader bounces. Throw the demon in the volcano. Yes! Shanna 05/11/2006 02:33 pm Welcome to the jungle Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon. Shanna 05/11/2006 02:32 pm Welcome to the jungle Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon. Soon, promise. Thanks for the feedback. LOL good way of gaining some time!! cannot wait for the next chapter!!! :D Yeah, that's Spike... always with the wacky ideas lol But at least it worked. I'll start working on the next chapter right away. Thanks for the review. Wow! What if they just go kill the Italian slut? Will that stop the big bull dog? Nice to have this fun story back again. Too bad there's that pesky rule about Slayers not being allowed to kill humans... Maybe we can find some way around it? We'll see. Thanks for the feedback. I'll try not to make you wait that long for the next update. Toss it into a volcano!!! lol Good idea. I'm sure that would work. Thanks for your review. vladt 05/11/2006 03:15 am Welcome to the jungle wonderful update to a fine tale. thanks for the read. Thanks, I'm flattered :) Thanks for great chapter. i do like your Buffy and Spike dialogue. Thanks hon, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Robyn 05/10/2006 10:45 pm Welcome to the jungle Thank you for the excellent update. You did a great job of showing Buffy's stubbornness as well as Spike's ability to egg her on. I really enjoyed the humor mixed with action that you had in this chapter. Glad you enjoy the interaction between the characters and the humor. It's always nice to have a review that lets you know that you succeeded at what you were trying to do. Mixing action and humor was my goal in this chapter. Thank you for your review Robyn. Lou 05/10/2006 10:05 pm Welcome to the jungle Ha! Nothing our guys can't handle! Super Spike. Nope, nothing they can't handle. They bicker a lot, but they're an amazing team. That's why we love 'em lol Thanks for your review Goody, I had been waiting on this! You didn't dissapoint me either, great chappie! You have a great sense of humor, can't wait for the next one. Sorry for the wait. My job keeps me busy. But I'm already working on the next chapter so it shouldn't take too long this time. I'm glad you think it was worth the wait and especially glad I made you laugh ;) wow1 I didn't know anyone could making something action-packed and humourous at the same time. Grat chapter. Thanks for the review, it made me happy! Ben is a big a weasel as his father. Buffy driving is too too scary. Buffy driving? Spike really was taking his life in his hands. :) I loved all of Buffy's snide comments about men and driving, they were funny and true. I am really looking forward to how the situation with the monster turns out, and how they are going to survive. Thanks for a great story. Lou 03/31/2006 10:11 am Road trip Surely our dynamic duo will see off the clunky monster - please. As much as I enjoy Ben tormenting Carlita, I don't think angering is going to end too well for him. And poor Spike all cooped up in the backseat with Buffy driving. That is a trying time. And now... well, cant wait for an update so see what happens next. Great chapter. And, please, update soon. Oh yeah, he's pushing his luck big time lol I'll try to update soon, promise. omg!!! please no!! Oooo irritating dego bitch! *attacks with claws* Go for the eyes! lol Nikkole 03/31/2006 04:45 am Road trip Interesting! You know they will be ok, they are Buffy and Spike, they will always be ok! What is that big demon? Is it a hell hound? Loved the Buffy driving adventure. I am always amazed that a California girl of that age cannot drive. More story please. I know. She's hopeless. But she can kick a Fyarl demon's ass in fifteen seconds flat, so I guess that counts for something ;) Maybe Spike could give her driving lessons when they get back home. Not in his Desoto though. He'd be too worried for his baby lol vladt 03/31/2006 12:14 am Road trip good update. evil place to stop. thanks for the fun read. Yes, really bad place for the car to break down. Especially since it's getting dark. Stuck in the middle of a forest after dark with no weapon and a thing as big as a truck following you, not so fun. But they're Spike and Buffy, so there's nothing to worry about. Hopefully ;) rayan 03/30/2006 11:50 pm Road trip goood chapterr alright they are lost, their jeep's not working and a monster is chasing them! i think Buffy should ask the council to refund their vacation once this is over. LOL I just might use that ;) Thanks for all your reviews! Well Ben did try to tell them, of course he completely messed up by not clarifying who he was. I really like that Buffy came clean to Spike about her wanting him to bite her. And the hot tub stuff, very nice. :) Ben calls that trying? and what's his problem with vampires? Well... Ben's chicken. He's a wimp and Carlita is a bitch. Bad combination. And his problem with vampires: He's part of the concil and his uncle is Quentin Traves. Nuf said lol Lou 03/28/2006 12:58 pm Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies God they're so sweet together!!!! awww loved that update!!! lol, banging against the door to embarrass Ben, that was funny Wasn't it? I thought it was :) Such a Spike thing to do. Too bad it made Ben change his mind about warning them. But to be fair, I think Ben is was too scared of Carlita and what she would do to him to really warn them. He would have probably changed his mind anyway. Oh dear! Maybe they should have listened to Ben. I guess it wouldn't be the Buffyverse if there wasn't an unexpected enemy attack or two. Lovely bubble bath. Maybe if Ben wasn't acting so weird and saying the wrong things, they would have listen to him. But of course, the moron couldn't just come out and say it "The concil is after you." That would have been too easy. Poor Ben, the guy is completely clueless lol Thanks for all your reviews. vladt 03/28/2006 05:31 am Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies good update. this is a very good read. thank you. rayan 03/28/2006 02:50 am Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies cool fic...i never thought id say this in a million years but spike in maui...bloody perfect hehe...keep it up Spike would be bloody perfect in Alaska lol Although, I prefere him in Maui... Less clothing necessary. Great update, as usual. I love the dialogue between them. Very hot Spuffy - but in a bathroom stall - that's just ick. This was a whole lot of hot sexy fun. Loved when he came in and she commented that she hadn't had dessert. :) oh poor server*snigger* vladt 03/28/2006 05:15 am Dessert was not going to comment 'til i caught up on this wonderful fic, but this was delightful. thanks for the read. Thanks vladt. I appreciate it. Dirktavian 02/16/2006 09:33 am Dessert What a wonderful V-Day present!! Loved it-- and I was so thrilled to see you had updated. More soon, please! nice smut..:) *gasp* horrible woman.. tsk tsk GREAT chappie!!! Dammit dego woman, go away! LoL LMAO!! Go Spike! I love the tipping for the tupping! Thanks for the Valentine's Day prezzie. 20 questions always an interesting game for a date. :) I love how Buffy reassured-explained to Spike that she didn't have a problem with his demon side. to be forever hungry? horrible curse!now if only we could cast it on Riley*dreamy look* I hope monster eats Carlita I like the way you think. A curse on Riley... what a great idea! Dirktavian 01/24/2006 01:47 pm Hawaiian magic Ummm...Scrumptious looking, and slightly nervous-- Just how I like my Spike! Thanks for the update-- I had been following this story on another site, so I'm really greatful for the new chapter. Can't wait for Buffy to spill her "confused" feelings over wanting Spike to snack on her neck. Maybe she'll be brave enough after the big smack-down. Please update again soon! Buffy and confused seem to go hand in hand doesn't it? The girl always has to make everything more complicated than it has to be. But she'll figure things out... eventually. Thankfully, she has Spike to clarify things for her lol First time I write a bitey fic, so we'll see if I can pull this off. jane 01/24/2006 06:13 am Hawaiian magic Great update can't wait to see how Buffy and spike deal with the new threat. Look it up *sticks out tongue* They're like the pixies, trolls, or leprechauns of Hawaii. I know there are several sites because I had to look up the spelling to make sure. Most of the Hawaiian words I know, I learned orally so I usually have to look up spelling. Hehe, Spike has one sexy okole *swoons* Too find out what an okole is, go here (and no it's not perverted, just funny if you know what an okole is) http://www.brown.edu/Departments/AmCiv/Studentprojects/GISP10/week11/okole :D That was funny. Thanks hon. I'll look up the other words you said. Well, can't help you with Maui, I only lived on Oahu and never visited the other islands. Ooo ooo, they should run into some Menehune!! Heehee What's a Menehune? I'm curious. Eeeeek! WTF is Carlita summoning? It's nice that Spike and Buffy had a nice day but I guess nothing that good could last long for them. More story please. lol you crack me up. She's summoning something nasty, of course ;) And about the good stufff not lasting, well, it will last for another day before things get hellish. But that won't last too long. The story was never meant to be really angsty. Lou 01/24/2006 04:00 am Hawaiian magic Well that's cheating - summoning a demon to do the dirty work. lol Did you really think Carlita would get her hands dirty? Beside, she's not a stupid woman, she knows Buffy would kick her ass while Spike would hold her ;) daisy 01/24/2006 03:17 am Hawaiian magic well that sounded ominous. can't wiat for more. poor buffy is going to have to do some slaying on her vacation. happy to see they got together. more soon please Yep, she can't even have a little vacation without having to work. The life of a Slayer sucks sometimes. Thank God she has hot, sexy, naked compensations... namely, Spike lol Ohh, I was so happy when Buffy stood up to Xander! I love how this fic is progressing! It's a great pace, not too fast, and not too slow, it's just right. OK, I'll tell you how I feel... I feel its friggin' brilliant. What a nice, spiffy shiny reality you've crafted here. Bravo! :D Thanks Does this mean that Buffy is going to - gasp - tell her friends about Spike when she gets home? And, looking forward to Buffy doing something wicked to Quentin Travers, the big jerk. he makes and excellent bad guy. This story is very addictive, I haven't been able to stop reading. Love the naked wrestling with the camera. Wasn't that fun? The naked wrestling I mean. I thought it was fun :D If you haven't been able to stop reading, then I'm happy. Means I'm doing something right. Thanks. The phone call from Xander and Buffy's slip about Spike's win was quite funny. I love the whole Buffy-Spike fun. And Carlita is right, Travers is a rat. :) argh I hate this Carlita!!!arrogant, hateful, hearless.. i'm rambling sorry it's just nice to hate someone once in a while I know. Isn't she delightfully evil? I'm the one creating her, and I want to smack her around a bit lol What a bitca! Thanks for reviewing. How very confusing! I'm sure i've read this chapter already....! Oh well! I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to seeing what happens with Carlita and Travers plotting against our faveourite couple. Looking forward to more soon! Maybe you've read it on SR or B&S Diaries. I was a little behind on posting here. But not anymore and the next chapter will be new. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoy the story. I am reading, actually. But may not have reviewed because I read the first several chapters all at the same time and then went directly to bed. Sorry1 Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. Jane 01/23/2006 06:35 am Phone calls and photo shoot Great update, I'm really liking this story. Eee!! I want those photos!!! And I can't wait to see Xander's face!! lmao!! Lou 01/23/2006 05:14 am Phone calls and photo shoot You've made them so sweet together - delicious! Beware volcanoes... OMG! This bit of nastiness has to be completely unexpected by Buffy. Spike could probably tell her a thing or two about the Council of Wankers but it looks like she is going to get a good idea on her own. More story please. Yep. The Council's always been a pain in her butt, but she'll soon find out they can be more than that lol Loved the squabble. These two deserve each other. What a great ending to their games. :) Very, very glad that she told him the truth of what she wanted. Things will definitely never be boring with those two. Nope. Boring is not in their future. Thanks for reviewing. His meaty @%#! O my! Yes! they did it, they did it (place scoobie dance here). This is a grate story very original. Cant wait for another update. gaillee 01/18/2006 09:55 am Playing games never ends well... or does it? Love...Love...Love it! Are the games done now? Thanks, super chapter. Eeeeeeee!! YAAAY! Whew - I was worried about Buffy's shoes there for a minute. Glad to see she's still procrastinating. I like that Buffy finally figured things out and is willing to make the first move, but to wait not always a good thing. It doesn't seem that Buffy will be able to magically make things right with Spike tomorrow since there seems to be a hit out on her. More story please. Lou 01/17/2006 10:32 pm And my sins will be forgiven You know that's pure torment, don't you??? gaillee 01/17/2006 04:08 pm And my sins will be forgiven I hope she isn't setting herself up for a fall by waiting...she always waits. Thanks for the update Well that wasn't much *pouts* pounce him!! ^.^ T_T Buffy is driving me crazy! Why does she have to be so COMPLETELY IMPOSSIBLE?! But...amazing story! Buffy is a nitwit - surely she knows that sitting alone in a bar wearing a trampy outfit is going to attract attention. Spike ought to kick her butt. If anyone ever thought that Buffy was a bitch they need to meet Carlita. Too bad that Spike trying to help Buffy out at the bar backfired in a way neither could ever expect. This story just got interesting in a very unexpected way, hopefully Ben will grow a pair and warn Buffy and Spike. Poor Ben... The guy has been terrorized by his uncle as a child, there's very little chance he'll ever grow a pair lol. gaillee 12/21/2005 01:58 am One too many rejection Thanks for the intriguing beginning. I love the interaction between Spike and Buffy (except for the continual misunderstanding). I will be watching for updates. (Yah, I suspect Quentin, too!) ComedyofErrors 12/19/2005 11:09 pm One too many rejection Oooh, this has Quentin Travers written all over it. Excellent update. I hate the stupid dego bitch.... is she going to die a painful death?? *grins hopefully* Believe in karma ;) It's all I can say ACK! Who are the murderers? What exactly did Buffy do or who did she kill? I thought we were going to get a lovely tropical PWP with this story but it appears to be turning into danger and adventure. Is 'danger and adventure' a good thing? I hope so lol. But there won't be too much of it. Just a little to spice things up. I'm keeping this story light and romantic. The other story I'm working on, Please Mrs. Jailer, is pretty angsty and I needed a break from the drama lol So don't expect too much angst in this one. Just enough. Spike always makes life interesting. Loved both of their choice in song. Great chapter. LOL. Not so sure about Buffy's singing - I'm still cringing from SMG's (1st season?) rendition of Macho Man. LOL I completely forgot about that. Good times :D But let's just say 'Bitch' isn't the kind of song that requires a beautiful voice, so she did all right. Isn't it funny how Buffy is so good at slaying, but she can't do anything else? She can't sing, she can't act, she can't drive, she can't cook... Poor girl! Thanks for your review. Spike singing in Hawaii! Can't imagine a better vacation than the one Buffy is having. Fun story. ComedyofErrors 12/06/2005 02:45 am Hawaiian Idol Hilarious and sweet. I'm curious to see what the deal with the Italtian woman is. Spike asking the room service guy his blood type, so funny. I love how easy it is for them to get into a fight. Fun chapter. :) And you know they just love it. They'd be bored to death and they didn't argue all the time ;) That's also why we love them so much lol. Thanks for all your reviews. Whats wrong with the Princess Diaries?? *bops Spike* Besides the fact it had little to do with the book and the sequel had NOTHING to do with the books.... I still loved them *waves arms and bops him again* LoL
And poor Spike.... *whimpers* but he was being an ass *tsk tsk* Love the Princess Diaries too. But he's a guy, of course he's not gonna admit that he loved it ;) I absolutely love the freedom they have, and the good natured bickering. Peeping tom is right! You're right about the freedom thing. That was the point of the story. I thought that if Buffy was alone with Spike and away from Sunnydale and her friends, she might let her guards down long enough to give Spike a chance. Thanks for you reviews. What a lovely dream and then to come back to her room to see her dream in the flesh. Lucky girl. Loved the ending of this chapter, very fun. :) Asshole? Thats a game?? Painful.. You never played Asshole? That was my favorite College 'time wasting' card game. I almost turned into cave Isabel after a while, playing cards and drinking beer lol Gotta love College. Anyway, yes, it's a game Droool! She got back to the room before I could get him. I am hoping to get lots more good visuals coming up (pun intended). Aww, sorry. lol Next time, when you hear that Spike is all alone in a hotel room, run faster :D Thanks for your reviews, and I'll try to give you as much good visual as I can. I'm catching up with this fic and giggling like mad. I love your non-bitchy Buffy! Sex on legs. *nods* Yeppers, i agree with that one! I like her too. I like non-bitchy Buffy a lot more than bitchy Buffy, but Buffy wouldn't be Buffy is she wasn't bitchy once in a while, right? Maybe if Spike keeps her sexually satisfied, she'll stay in a good mood? We'll see ComedyofErrors 12/01/2005 12:07 am Who needs sun anyway? I envy Buffy that view. Whew. I read the first three chaps last night, what a great start! And this one, hot! Sex on legs indeed. "Sssslaayer!" <- that was REALLY funny! If you're wondering why I'm spamming you with reviews, it's because I just like to make it a point to reply to almost every chapter. That way I can encourage you to write some more! I am very intrigued by the lady that Buffy kept bumping into. I loved Spike's explanation and examples of his use of Slayer and how the one word can mean different things. Great chapter. Muahahaha, I got an idea of what he might do by himself.... I wish I could watch *sighs* Right there with ya lol ComedyofErrors 11/30/2005 09:38 am Slayer, such a lovely word If MarzBar isn't available, I'll take care of Spikey.
Hmm. Interesting reaction to Buffy. Could it be this holiday will have more than simple romance? Eagerly waiting to find out. Nice beach. I hope it's safe for Buffy to sleep alone on the beach. I volunteer to keep Spike comany in the room while she sun bathes. The insight into both their minds is really a nice touch. I'm happy that Buffy is really welcoming to the idea of her and Spike. It's so nice to have some nice romance when normally all the longer stories are full of angst. Katie 07/21/2008 05:07 am The longest night Ok never mind I got it, It Kinda goes AU after 6th This chapter is really good. I love that Spike went to the wrong door, that was so fun. YUM! Two weeks in Hawaii with Spike! She better get going or the vacation will be over before she knows it. More story please. Interrrrresting... I'm addicted already! It's just so funny and cute. ^^ 07/21/2008 04:33 am Welcome to Paradise Just one question it seem's to be summer but what time periode in Buffy is it? So far though I love the idea. I actually used to live on Kauai and for about 3 months I lived on Oahu, God I miss hawaii so much!!!!!!! Very, very cute story. It promises to be great fun already. It is an interesting idea, Buffy being aloud a vacation... Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I thought Buffy deserved a vacation too ;) Cool story so far.  Just one suggestion though...  You have different speakers in the same paragraphs in many places, which makes it a little hard to read, because you have to back up and be sure you know who is speaking.  It's much easier to read if you always separate the speakers.  Please don't take offense though, cause, I'm not knocking you.  I made the exact same mistake, when I first started writing and someone had to point that out to me, too.  Otherwise, nice story so far.  I'm off to read the next chapter.  :) fallen_angel 03/30/2006 12:15 am Welcome to Paradise canada not so much a bad place if u move south to toronto*my home town*, but for spuffy romance it's gotta be maui! so gonna see spike in a hawaiin shirt?or maybe swim gear? or...*puts on devlish smile and goes to check fic rating* lol you're right, nothing wrong with Canada. Especially since I live in Toronto too. Maybe I could write a fic in which Spike goes to T.O... And end up having to work as a stripper for one night because he ran out of cash. Do we have a strip club for women here? I don't even know. We had one in Montreal. Thanks for your review. This chapter is really cute. I love the exchange so far between Buffy and Spike. :) ComedyofErrors 11/28/2005 02:25 am Welcome to Paradise THis is a great begining. Can't wait to see more. Thanks, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the fic. | |||
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