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Lying Eyes by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Betrayed
02/19/2006 06:49 pm
Gaaahhhh....Okay, I just startled my husband into a near wreck as I read this update (I am printing it off to keep and was reading on the way home).
You are EVIL! I still think Angel is with Faith though. I notice her words to Giles aren't the lovey dovey kind she used to her phone buddy. So maybe Angel IS the one that's on her leash.
Maybe Giles is working undercover and not a rat in with Faith after all. Poor Spike is being played no matter what though.
You write this so well it if believable any way you work it. Excellent update.
Kathleen
thanks for the compliment on my stories BTW.
You are EVIL! I still think Angel is with Faith though. I notice her words to Giles aren't the lovey dovey kind she used to her phone buddy. So maybe Angel IS the one that's on her leash.
Maybe Giles is working undercover and not a rat in with Faith after all. Poor Spike is being played no matter what though.
You write this so well it if believable any way you work it. Excellent update.
Kathleen
thanks for the compliment on my stories BTW.
sorry my story almost claimed your life....lol...not saying anything at this point...but you're right, either way Spike is kind of screwed here... :(
02/19/2006 06:25 pm
Wow! I never expected it to be Giles that was working with Faith! Please tell me that this is part of his plan and not actually happening! Please update soon!
not telling you anything yet :) sorry...i'm sticking to my no comments on the plot from here on out policy :)
ComedyofErrors
02/19/2006 04:46 pm
Hmm. Curiouser and curiouser.
:)
Lou
02/19/2006 02:58 pm
This story has more suspects than you can shake a stick at! Top stuff!
lol...that's a good thing i hope :) glad you like it
02/19/2006 02:19 pm
Does happy dance ! I know the bad guy was giles *grin* Excellant chapter - poor poor Spike! I love this fic!
yes poor poor Spike :( glad you're loving the fic,though! :)
02/19/2006 01:35 pm
Oh, man... I have to admit, I didn't see that coming. I mean, I DID in the beginning... But then the whole Angel thing threw me off. Great chapter!
thanx, glad you're enjoying it :)
Typerbabe57
02/19/2006 06:02 am
Oi! All the twists and turns! Is Giles really betraying Spike?--I kinda think not, since that would mean betraying Buffy, and he did say the plan would require sacrifice--I'm just not sure if Spike knew how big of a sacrifice. Still, I can seldom anticipate the direction your stories will take--that's what makes them so much fun to read! Thanks for another great chapter.
so glad to keep everybody guessing...i'm having a lot of fun with this one...i would comment more directly on your comments but i'm being very careful at this point not to give anything away at all so...thanx for the review :)
02/19/2006 04:06 am
Bad, Bad Giles!! Poor Spike! More please.
yes, poor Spike! glad you're enjoying it, i'll update soon, i promise! :)
vladt
02/19/2006 04:06 am
excellent. distracting us with angel, spring giles as the villian. or is he? fun read. thanks
lol...thanx for review, glad to keep everyone guessing :)
SpaceLord
02/19/2006 03:51 am
Ohh the plot is thickening for sure....whatever is Giles up to? Why would he do this?
:) mwah-hah-hah-hah
Rj
02/19/2006 03:51 am
Wow - that's gotta be one of the evilest cliff hangers ever. This is a great story - I'm hooked on it, but really hoping this chapter was a bit of a mislead!
thank you :) again, no comments from me on the actual plot probably from here on out... :)
SpaceLord
02/19/2006 03:51 am
Ohh the plot is thickening for sure....whatever is Giles up to? Why would he do this?
:) wait and see
linpen
02/19/2006 03:20 am
What ever his agenda is this Giles is just scarey. Love how you are racking up the tension in this story.
thanx...glad it's working :)
02/19/2006 03:00 am
NOOOOOOOO... I just can't believe it...So waiting for more.
lol..soon i promise :)
02/19/2006 02:59 am
hmmm.... so now I have to ponder if Giles is acting out of the evilness of his heart, or what he perceives to be the greater good. And still no hint on Angel's part in this game, or lack thereof. But I'm definitely thinking that Spike isn't the only one who was playing both sides of the fence.
more on Angel next chapter...other than that no comments on anything from me at this point :) lol
02/19/2006 02:18 am
ACK!! Are you going to have Faith torture Spike some more?? WTF is happening with Buffy and Angelus? More story soon please.
you'll have to wait and see, i've reached a point in the story where i really shouldn't say anything at all...lol... don't want to give anything away... :)
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