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Scars by JamesMFan
Chapter: Leaving
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05/22/2010 11:40 am
DoWnEr
04/09/2007 01:33 pm
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Damn starting to really hate Buffy now. Fucking whore. And that guy is really a fucking asshole. He really needs to die. It's obvious, at least for a man, that he's doing it all because he's jealous and not because he cares.
I'm sure you can recognize women who pull the same stunt. Men can spot assholes in the same way.
Really am enjoying the story, if i wasn't i wouldn't have such strong feelings for any of the characters but just because i love the story doesn't mean i have to like some of the characters.
I like the fact that you didn't turn Spike into softy right off the bat. Like how he's still pure evil and knows it but knows he's slowly falling for the slayer and would be willing to change if he allows himself to fall further. You don't see that a lot.
Damn starting to really hate Buffy now. Fucking whore. And that guy is really a fucking asshole. He really needs to die. It's obvious, at least for a man, that he's doing it all because he's jealous and not because he cares.
I'm sure you can recognize women who pull the same stunt. Men can spot assholes in the same way.
Really am enjoying the story, if i wasn't i wouldn't have such strong feelings for any of the characters but just because i love the story doesn't mean i have to like some of the characters.
I like the fact that you didn't turn Spike into softy right off the bat. Like how he's still pure evil and knows it but knows he's slowly falling for the slayer and would be willing to change if he allows himself to fall further. You don't see that a lot.
DoWnEr
04/09/2007 01:33 pm
....
Damn starting to really hate Buffy now. Fucking whore. And that guy is really a fucking asshole. He really needs to die. It's obvious, at least for a man, that he's doing it all because he's jealous and not because he cares.
I'm sure you can recognize women who pull the same stunt. Men can spot assholes in the same way.
Really am enjoying the story, if i wasn't i wouldn't have such strong feelings for any of the characters but just because i love the story doesn't mean i have to like some of the characters.
I like the fact that you didn't turn Spike into softy right off the bat. Like how he's still pure evil and knows it but knows he's slowly falling for the slayer and would be willing to change if he allows himself to fall further. You don't see that a lot.
Damn starting to really hate Buffy now. Fucking whore. And that guy is really a fucking asshole. He really needs to die. It's obvious, at least for a man, that he's doing it all because he's jealous and not because he cares.
I'm sure you can recognize women who pull the same stunt. Men can spot assholes in the same way.
Really am enjoying the story, if i wasn't i wouldn't have such strong feelings for any of the characters but just because i love the story doesn't mean i have to like some of the characters.
I like the fact that you didn't turn Spike into softy right off the bat. Like how he's still pure evil and knows it but knows he's slowly falling for the slayer and would be willing to change if he allows himself to fall further. You don't see that a lot.
08/11/2006 05:19 am
knew he couldn't leave...poor spike...but he'd better come clean right away, or it'll be bad...gotta read more now :)
04/14/2006 04:28 am
lovely - sigh - i still want J for my own - can i justhave them both - my own vampries!
03/26/2006 05:06 pm
Oh no he CAN’T leave, not now! GAH! And Jeremiah came back, but now he’s run off again. *sigh* Oh thank god… Spike didn’t leave town.
vladt
03/01/2006 12:32 am
had to reread this before commenting(and i was having i really bad day during the first reading). i love the story, i like jeremiah, but if he is really gone this time, he seems to be more of a distraction, than an asset.thanks for the read. i really love the story and apologize for the negative comment.
Lou
02/28/2006 03:39 pm
You can't leave me there!!!!
just sue
02/25/2006 11:32 am
Well, that answers all the questions I had. Great chapter and am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks ever so.
02/25/2006 08:03 am
Ahhh....you had me worried for a minute! Thought I was going to have to kick Spike's ass lol. Still wondering what Jeremiah is up to, though. :)
Nikkole
02/25/2006 06:49 am
Jeremiah seems so nice. I am just waiting for him to show his true face. I guess I like him, but don't trust him. Nothing is ever as it seems in Sunnydale. Very nice chapter. I can't wait for more!
Taylormaid
02/25/2006 06:06 am
Really enjoyed this chapter. I'm afraid the sh*t is gonna hit the fan soon for Spike. I'm sad to see Jeremiah go...I've liked him a lot.
02/25/2006 06:00 am
Spike didn't get far this time.
02/25/2006 04:36 am
Had me worried there for a bit. lol
I'm glad you don't have Spike changing his ways overnight just because he has something going with Buffy. This is so much more realistic and true to his character at the time.
I'm glad you don't have Spike changing his ways overnight just because he has something going with Buffy. This is so much more realistic and true to his character at the time.
02/25/2006 02:56 am
god you are so not helping me! Every chapter i try to decide how i feel about this fic! and every chapter you leave me staddlin' the fence...part of me hates him for lying to her and part of me hates her for believing him...aggghhh!!! great update by the way...lol
Spikes Slayer2
02/25/2006 02:44 am
HA! i knew he wouldnt really leave.. he's in to deep.. lol
02/25/2006 01:13 am
Always look forward to a new chapter of this one. Jeremiah is a truly unique idea for a character, and you've used him well in creating interest for the plot. I also like the complexity you've used with Buffy's trust of Spike. She's almost made herself trust him because she needs him so much. It's well done. Finally, I like the fact that he's still not worthy of it. And he knows it.
02/25/2006 12:32 am
Classic Spike... Always loves bitch. Love it!
Shanna
02/25/2006 12:10 am
I do like this story very much. Well written and different is a very good way. Here's hoping that Spike decides to change his evil blood sucking ways due to love and that this love is returned. Fingers and toes crossed.
ape
02/24/2006 11:17 pm
who in the holy fuck is this asshole and why is he touching another man's girl.i hope he gets his head torn off, the bastard.
good story though.
good story though.
02/24/2006 10:33 pm
Gah, I can see badness on the horizon for these two.
Jeremiah was adorable (as always) but I wish he hadn't planted doubts in Buffy's mind. I know it is bad of me but I just don't want Spike to get caught out 'cause that only leads to pain for both of them *sigh*
Fabulous update,thank you!
Jeremiah was adorable (as always) but I wish he hadn't planted doubts in Buffy's mind. I know it is bad of me but I just don't want Spike to get caught out 'cause that only leads to pain for both of them *sigh*
Fabulous update,thank you!
02/24/2006 10:32 pm
I really really enjoyed this. Will be waiting for more.
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